Baby's First Cosplay

This is my first ever cosplay as Ellie Williams from "The Last of Us". Taken on June 21, 2014 at HeroesCon in Charlotte, North Carolina. I am the cosplayer on the left. I've forgotten who the other Ellie in this picture is. I will be cosplaying Ellie again at the 2015 HeroesCon, but I will have updated my costume a bit, due to a more lenient timetable and some necessary alterations. Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.